Portfolio Editing

NOTE: Because nearly every document I edit is confidential to my clients and can't be shared (and I will treat your documents with the same confidentiality), only a few early examples are given here, not complete documents. (Click on the image to open the file [if available] or to see more detail.)

The exceptions are these publicly available documents:

Technical Report

This 105-word piece of text was simplified by removing redundancies and extraneous words. The final result? Just 19 words!

Screenshot from presentation on Plain Language writing

Conference Abstract

Editing reduced the word count while improving understanding.

Example of simplifying text

Instructions

Editing and rewriting helped make this pattern understandable by both beginners and experienced practitioners.

Screenshot from a case study in editing and rewriting a pattern

Webpage last updated: 29 January 2023